Tuesday, 14 February 2012

Shannon and Sydney made a comic strip using the ipad.

3 comments:

  1. Ok room 16. Have a look at the comic strip. Great job by the creators. There are a few spelling and grammar problems... Can you find them?

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  2. Mrs price should have a capital

    'Omg' should have capitals because it stands for words I think

    'Where is that Girl!!!!!!' Girl shouldn't have a capital

    'She told them off very harshly' should say Mrs Price told off the kids very harshly maybe?

    'What do you think your doing' should be what do you think you're doing

    she arrived should be She arrived

    Profishanal is spelt Professional

    'And ended op sleeping on a park bench' should be 'And ended up sleeping on a park bench'

    Good job anyway guys you created an awesome comic and hope I got them right!

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